Wouldn't it be fun if…
Has been sent to final beta. I was REALLY tempted to end it at a natural cliffhanger spot and go to bed, but I slogged on for another thousand. This is a larger than normal chapter, so consider it a (potentially late) Christmas present, but cut my last beta some slack. Happy Holidays to everyone!
This is the story I co-write with a group headed by AlbertG that also includes Ed Becerra from the Viridian Dreams Yahoo group. I’m writing the sections that follow the Gorns as the battle of Proxima nears a climax! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1944628/65/
We’d gone maybe half a dozen steps before the sounds started. There were shouts, as well as some muffled explosions. Bright lights of various colours flashed from that top row of tower windows – enough to tell me there was a full scale duel happening up there. It ended with a loud bang that left … Read more