Uzumaki Clan a.k.a. Clan Kitsune

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Uzumaki Clan a.k.a. Clan Kitsune

Unread postby Vael » February 20th, 2010, 4:42 am

Right, this is what has been distracting me for sometime now, and I would like to blame Shiogakure for the ENTIRE thing. As far as I'm concerned, all that follows doesn't exist, just some interesting ideas that had me going, "hmm..." for a really, really long time. So...enjoy, and hopefully I'll be back on the ball with Shiogakure after posting this.

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Uzumaki Clan: Kitsune Seal Bloodline Limit

Characteristics:
- Co-exists with Bloodlines present within the body, this trait also allows for ONE completely safe and successful Bloodline Theft surgery as the Bloodline is fully integrated into the body to the point where it would work as if the recipient was born with the bloodline. However, these other Bloodlines cannot be passed down to the next generation without surgery.
- Moderate regeneration/healing present, sans limb regrowth. Slowed aging after 20 years, extended lifespan, and high resistance to natural diseases/poisons are all side-effects of the regeneration.
- Chakra reserves are naturally higher than the norm; a newborn from the clan has the chakra capacity of a genin.

Kitsune Bi Seal:
- This is a genetic seal that manifests itself as a series of tail-like spirals around the bearer’s belly button. Each tail represents how much yokai is stored within the seal, and naturally goes up to eight. The ninth tail is only manifested by the Clan Leader/Alpha.
- This seal is a second source of chakra with its own more porous chakra network that easily allows the bearer’s body to be flooded with yokai when the seal is active, this system also allows for yokai to be used in kitsune clan techniques when needed.
- As for the extended lifespan, for each tail present, a clan member’s lifespan is extended by 20 years. This is limited to the eighth tail (160 years) as the ninth tail does not add to one’s lifespan.
- It constantly absorbs miniscule amounts of chakra around the bearer, this is then converted into yokai to add to the clan member’s power.
- This seal connects a clan member to a MASSIVE clan-wide mindscape containing a library of sorts of EVERYTHING each clan member has worked on, created, or discovered. It isn’t a hive mind; it’s more of an insubstantial library. It also connects clan members to each other’s personal mindscapes (with permission).
- The Clan Head, the nine-tail, has a unique ability to create the Kitsune Bi Seal in someone outside the Clan, the person in question always ending up as a one-tail. If this person has a bloodline, the bloodline will considered as being transplanted and therefore will not be passed down to their children without surgery.

Bloodline Activated:
- When this Bloodline is activated, any other Bloodline present is activated as well, lasting as long as Kitsune Bi Seal is active. This does not work in reverse, as Bloodlines can be used without tripping the Seal.
- When activated, the Clan undergoes a transformation similar to Naruto in that they gain the feral look (wilder hair, claws, fangs, feral eyes, whisker marks), though the iris of the eyes change colour to match their yokai.
- In this state, whilst super-charged by their yokai (demonic chakra), their physical prowess (strength, speed, durability) are all enhanced by a factor of 2 for each tail. Any bloodline present is also enhanced, its power doubling for every tail gained.
- Their Regen/Healing is tripled for every tail gained, limb regrowth is also now possible though it permanently uses up whatever yokai is put into it. Meaning this aspect of the ability could, in fact absorb an entire tail’s worth of Yokai, this can be restored eventually.
- There is a time-limit on this bloodline’s activation length as even the body of a clan member cannot handle an overabundance of yokai for long. It initially lasts for 2 minutes, this time increases the more they train with their yokai, it however resets the moment they gain another tail.
- Other then the sudden explosion of power they experience from 1 to 4 tails, they don’t feel different from other nin. 5 to 8 tails introduces a generalized killing intent over everyone in the area as they themselves become a little more feral. At 9 tails, they gain a Presence that basically a focused or generalized killing intent mixed with their chakra element, bloodline, and specialty mixed together into a sensation that is far more intimidating than mere killing intent.

Clan Techniques:
Kitsune-Ken – Fighting style, highly adaptable, unconventional, HIGHLY customizable, developed as a highly effective kenjutsu or taijutsu depending on the practitioner
Kitsune Jutsu – Modified ninjutsu that are moulded with yokai, signified by the kitsune hand seal at the beginning of a hand-seal sequence. Ninjutsu moulded with yokai are MUCH more potent than those moulded with chakra, on a 1 to 10 basis, where one unit of yokai has the same power as ten units of chakra, also the ninjutsu itself tends to show a semblance of awareness, being generally selective of targets or even ‘finding’ ways to strike the target outside the norm, this feature is proportional to the power of the ninjutsu used. Most ninjutsu modified this way tend to take on kitsune-related forms, hence the name
Kitsune Magen – Modified genjutsu moulded with yokai, signified by the kitsune seal at the end of a hand-seal sequence. Genjutsu moulded with yokai tend to affect all senses automatically, though it always has one subtle flaw, the moment that flaw is caught, then the genjutsu is broken
Rasengan – Yondaime’s jutsu, learned and completed by Naruto, who proceeded to create a few variations: Rasenshuriken (ranged rasengan...kinda), Rasenken (a physical attack with chakra swirling around the attacking limb/tool, think jyuuken meets rasengan), Oodama Rasengan (bigger rasengan), Five-Point Rasengan (an assassination technique since it's quick and lethal, creates a compressed rasengan above a finger, the completed version creating five rasengan on each finger and thumb)
~WARNING! MIND AT WORK!~

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Re: Uzumaki Clan a.k.a. Clan Kitsune

Unread postby Nitramy » February 20th, 2010, 12:04 pm

You should probably add the "Sexy Technique" as a complete physical transformation-type genjutsu usable only by Kitsune clan members.

Other than that, this is an interesting list.
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