The End!

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The End!

Unread postby Psalm Of Fire » July 5th, 2010, 6:06 pm

:eyes_on_fire: These plot points don't make a beautiful line! These bits of data have potential, but so far my attempts feel so hamfisted! I need a second mind to run stuff by, someone who has fun with plots/emotional climaxes.

Just a conversation or two. Any candidates want to give it a spin and lend me a hand? :waytogo
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Re: The End!

Unread postby Dechstreme » July 5th, 2010, 8:26 pm

The hell are you talking about?
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Re: The End!

Unread postby MEKristian » July 5th, 2010, 8:50 pm

The hell are you talking about?
I think he wants somebody to talk plot points over with... but other than that, your guess is as good as mine.
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Re: The End!

Unread postby Thozmp » July 5th, 2010, 9:58 pm

I always like talking plot points, and sometimes I can see the scene in my head and work out the dialog from there, especially if it's well described to me. I'd like to have a conversation or two.
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Re: The End!

Unread postby Dechstreme » July 5th, 2010, 10:05 pm

We need more details about the story he's trying to work on. At least, that is what I think.
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Re: The End!

Unread postby Aldraia Dragonsong » July 6th, 2010, 12:31 am

Conversations? I love conversations! What is the topic?
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Re: The End!

Unread postby Psalm Of Fire » July 6th, 2010, 12:48 am

Sorry for the lack of clarity y'all, frustration can do that to you. Yes, I needed some help with plot points and outlining the climax/third act of the novel. I've actually had two people PM volunteer already, so I'm set. Thanks for the community support! If I need further help, I'll be sure to mention it.
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