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If you got here, I'm going to assume you've read chapter 41...
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Last Chance
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Rather like a cross between Edgar Allan Poe's The Pit and the Pendulum, and the "bull in a china shop" proverb, then?I felt a pit in my stomach and a raging bull in my chest.
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From his new fic Long Night of the HarvestDon't forget: Mass Effect is powered by magic space rocks. Evangelion is powered by Your Mom.
From his new fic Long Night of the HarvestDon't forget: Mass Effect is powered by magic space rocks. Evangelion is powered by Your Mom.
Writing Progress
NOFP: Chapter 42
Complete and sent to Beta
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This was addressed in this chapter. (It's actually been planned since before she left. People can form the oddest friendships...)Something that I have noticed is that while it is mentioned that Malfoy may becoming back via Durmstrang, no one commented upon that Millicent may come back with Beauxbatons, and then forced into Harry's position to further the parallels of the time lines. The Slytherins that were attacking her will want her punished as a demonstration if she does so, and as one does not need to be willing to participate...
As for why Millicent would come back, theme wise the AuthorLord has been establishing that not all Slytherins are bad, and she, her dead sister, and Slughorn are our sympathetic (ish) characters. And with the return of Snape, Malfoy, and the worse Slytherins, Slughorn needs some support to continue that theme. In story, well, do you really think Millicent would actually voice why she fled Hogwarts? It does make sense for the former Hogwarts student to return as a guide and if she can't speak plainly it becomes very fishy if she tries to get out of the job too much, as going to the TriWizard tournament is the opportunity of a lifetime.
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