Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby Phht » December 3rd, 2009, 12:43 am

Just some things to note:
  • You do realize that, because you put "(NO ONE else can call him these)" and that comment down at the Bingo Book rating in there, Kai's gonna get called by those whenever someone can do so after they find out the nicknames and that Kai only accepts the nicknames being used by specific people? Can't beat up or kill teammates after all.
  • Is the codename "Blank" because they haven't been assigned one yet, or are you saying the codename is actually "Blank"? I can kinda see the first in the case of a rookie ANBU (have to earn your animal mask or something). The latter doesn't quite fit in with the known theme for Konoha ANBU. Anyone else got an opinion on that?
  • The Chakra Armor sounds like a mix of Raikage's Raiton Armor and the chakra armor from movie 1. Not too much issue there. Maybe you could provide a general range for how long the armor lasts?
  • Chakra Threads - these the same as chakra strings, yes? You might want to switch to that because there's an anime-only attack called "Chakra Threads" that might be confused with this move.
  • Chakra Enhancement - This sounds quite similar to opening the Gates while avoiding the actual use of Gates. Dunno about it. Anyone else?
  • Chakra Stealth - I'm not entirely sure how you can reduce chakra signature by putting a field of chakra around you. Then again, this IS a universe where you can summon house-sized sentient animals that speak English/Japanese. Probably okay, because it can be treated as having Mesai Gakure no Jutsu and chakra suppression as a basis. An issue though is that the field absorbs stimuli, which means that it would likely absorb light - either reflected off the body or passing through the field. That could result in a "black hole" appearance to the field, which could be counter to the stealth aspect depending on time of day? If so, you might just drop the visual aspect and go with just scent/sound/chakra suppression there.
  • Age - Go ahead and list current age above the break down of age when the character became a rank, because someone looking through won't know the person is a rookie ANBU and to take the age listed next to ANBU.
Several of the signature moves seem fairly chakra intensive, so maybe you could indicate how much of a drain those moves are (primarily the armor, enhancement, and stealth) given that your chakra cap is only 6? Other than that, everything seems fine.

... Man, I need to start working on something so I don't have the time to carefully read over and consider every little bit of a new person's character sheet. :panic:
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby MEKristian » December 3rd, 2009, 12:46 am

Don't you already have the wiki? If not, I dunno, make something up.
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby Vael » December 3rd, 2009, 2:18 am

Alrighty, thanks for the feed-back:

@Kits - A yup! That's a 10-4 buddy! :D

@Phht
-Firstly, nicknames...that's whole point ^^ I wanna make my character sweat trying to stop anyone from learnin his nicknames. I also want one of those classic "Shit." moments, like Chouji's ("What. Did. You. Call. Me?").
-In regards to his codename, he's a new ANBU member, but the codename was rather deliberately chosen, in part to confuse those not in the know. If I need to change it, I'll do so.
-On chakra enhancement, yes, it is exactly that. The Gates are dangerous, but his Clan managed to find a way to utilise the Gates' power without opening them. Of course it won't be as powerful as the real deal though.
- Chakra Stealth, thanks for the catch, I'll get on it.

Phht? Keep doin' what you're doin' you is well awesome ^^


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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby Phht » December 3rd, 2009, 3:22 am

MEK: Shush, before your guy gets a long history of helping at the Geriatrics Hospital or retirement home. :rollin:

Vael:
As spudman pointed out elsewhere, Konoha ANBU tend for an animal mask theme. It could work for a while since you're a newbie ANBU member, but having an animal mask ready for use might be a good idea just in case.

You might want to expand a bit on the Chakra Enhancement to clarify the point. Maybe mention that it only partially removes the limiters on the muscles (since the First Gate fully removes the limiters temporarily) to show that it's not quite as good as Gate opening while incurring similar damage to the user.
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby Vael » December 3rd, 2009, 4:17 am

There, done editting and tweaking...whatchya think?
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby Nasdaq » December 3rd, 2009, 9:36 pm

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Name: Omoi Jyūryō (First, Last)
Nickname: the Hellflower
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Jounin
Codename: None

Specializations:
Demolitions, Advanced
Engineering, Intermediate
Tactics, Intermediate
Strategy, Basic
Ninja Villages, Intermediate
Knowledge, Fire Country, Advanced
Knowledge, Lightning Country, Intermediate

Technique Breakdown:
Omoi is a master taijutsu specialist who utilizes close-range ninjutsu to enhance his attacks, generally through a brute force method due to poor chakra control but large quantities of chakra as a whole. He knows little to no genjutsu, and despises it for the most part, preferring to do things with his own to hands and reality rather then illusions. He has some skill with various equipments, particularly wire and shuriken, though often uses these in combination to create enclosed spaces for fights and cut off escape rather then offensively.

As a taijutsu specialist, Omoi can open up three of the Eight Gates, and has not made much effort to master opening any more, as generally that is enough when combined with his normal combat abilities. He uses his own heavyweight fighting style that takes elements of the Gōken, or Strong Fist, along with his own addition, grapples, and punches. Despite his large size, Omoi is extremely flexible and utilizes a large number of high and axe kicks as well as acrobatics in his fighting.

His skill with taijutsu and ninjutsu was enough for him to qualify as a jounin despite his deficiency in genjutsu. He is skilled in countering it, though he knows no actual techniques of his own and would never use it willingly. Although he does not hold it against people who do, he finds it personally unacceptable.

He uses Fire Release techniques such as the Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning and Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique.

Signature Techniques:
Katon: Jigokuhaná (Fire Release: Hellflower)
Omoi's personal ninjutsu, the Jigokuhaná is a close-range Rank A ninjutsu which capitalizes on his large chakra capacity and stamina to enhance his taijutsu moves. The move is done without hand seals and has an element of Elemental Recomposition in it's use. Fundamentally, it is done by opening up the chakra tenketsu and releasing recomposed elemental chakra from them, forming a shield of fire-element chakra around the users arms and/or legs. The chakra bleeds off and takes the form of various petals and flares when struck, creating flower like patterns when it does. This is how it got it's name.

The technique adds the elemental and physical power to normal taijutsu, particularly the Gōken, or Strong Fist, elements that Omoi utilizes. It is less effective in brute strength then the precise burst of chakra-enhanced strength, but it is still a far cry greater then the small amounts most other ninja of Omoi's level can release. This is why it is a Rank A technique. It can be combined with many other taijutsu moves, such as the Konoha Senpū or Konoha Shōfū. The fire chakra can ignite objects, including clothes and the surroundings, and leaves fiery footprints and other marks where he steps, lands, or strikes.

Because it shields the arms in chakra, it can be used defensively as well, and makes the user able to deflect or block attacks with ease. However, excessive use can cause chakra exhaustion and physical harm if overused.

Fire Release Armor
Developed by Omoi during his time in Kumogakure, the Fire Release Armor was inspired by the Lightning Release Armor used by the Fourth Raikage. However, while the concept is similar the functionality is quite different. Lightning Release Armor works by cloaking the body in lightning elemental chakra and stimulating the body, thus enhancing strength and speed as well as defense. However, because Omoi was of the fire affinity rather then lightning, he was unable to mimic this ability. He was, however, able to enhance his body in a similar manner. Because of the principle that heat is energy, the jutsu does stimulate the body, and can increase the user's speed and power. However, it is not nearly as fast as that of the true Lightning Release Armor, but is impressive never-the-less.

By cloaking his body in fire elemental chakra he boosts his body ever so slightly, but is unable to fool it completely. Instead, the heat he gives off forms a sort of blurring mirage effect around him, meaning that when he uses his natural or enhanced speed he literally becomes a blur. This makes it extremely hard for opponents to track him effectively and even harder to target him with any degree of precision.

The 'bleed' from the chakra effect makes it extremely hard for an opponent with a byakugan to target him effectively as he simply becomes a giant mass of chakra, while sharingan users will even be fooled by the mirage effect to a degree as afterimages confuse the tracking eye. Additionally, because he cloaks his body in the chakra it raises the temperature around him to searing degrees, making it possible for even near misses to cause damage as the heat scalding heat contacts an opponent. Likewise, enemy attacks on him will be faced with both an enhanced level of defense, particularly against fire or wind attacks, and the fact that an enemy is likely to harm themselves if they touch his body.

Catchphrase: "I will protect my home with my own two hands."
Appearance:
Standing tall at six foot seven, Omoi towers over most of his peers. This was not always so, as during his academy days he was the smallest of his class, but was always known for being scrappy regardless. His build is bulky, but well toned, and as a result he weighs in around 240 pounds. He has blue eyes and red hair, though he keeps his head shaved and the only evidence of his hair is in the small mustache that doesn't go beyond his lips and soul patch that he keeps well trimmed. His complexion is fairly pale Caucasian; he seems incapable of getting a tan, but rarely sunburns either. He has rakish good looks, looking somewhat ruggedly handsome, but he is not particularly stunning or attractive. He has a long string of black and red flowers tattooed starting on the left side of his waist that curl around his body and end up over his right shoulder.

Omoi wears five hitae-ite; his first is on his head, and is part of a white bandana he wears on his head. The second he wears more loosely around his neck. He wears the standard 'flak jacket' of Konohagakure shinobi, and no other shirt, to show off his physique, and usually leaves it unbuttoned as a result. He wears two hitae-ite around his upper arms as well. His final hitae-ite is worn around his waist like a belt at a slightly odd angle, alongside his actual belt which holds his equipment pouches and other equipment. He has a circular equipment package on the left side of his rear hip, and a rectangular equipment package on his right side hip. He stores a the standard tantō on his rear hip above the circular equipment pouch. Three equipment summoning scrolls are stored vertically on his belt as well, next to the circular equipment pouch on his belt.

He wears a set of fairly loose white cargo pants with various pouches and loops. The lower part of these pants can detach for ease of motion, and cover up a set of chakra-attuned weights that he wears on his legs and often drops when he removes the lower portion of his pants as well. His shoes are a sort of sandal with multiple straps. These go up to just around his ankles. They are black.

He wears a set of full of white arm covers that run from his wrists all the way up his forearms. Each of the covers has a set of five metal plates which wrap halfway around his arms and cover up the full length of his arms. Each of the plates bears the Konohagakure logo, making them something of modified hitae-ite plates.

External Contacts:
Omoi travelled to Kumogakure two years after becoming a Tokubetsu Jounin to train, and spent two years there as a sort of almost exchange student as well as a diplomatic envoy. Has some contacts there, mostly friends and some mild diplomatic recognition.

Clan/Family:
The Jyūryō clan is a relatively small clan known for their focus on close-range ninjutsu and taijutsu and shunning of genjutsu as a whole. Although they lack a unified clan style, they tend to focus on fire-based techniques and a select few body-enhancing clan moves. They tend to vary greatly in body size and type, but share the common hair tones of auburn to orange and blue eyes, as well as a pale complexion which rarely burns but never tans either.

They also tend to share a love of Rock Gardens.
Summons:
Omoi does have a contract to summon large beetles of a bombardier sort, but rarely makes use of it.

Age: 34
Graduated: 9
Chuunin: 11
Tokubetsu Jounin: 14
Jounin: 19

Elemental Affinities: Fire
Clan abilities/Kekkai Genkai:
The Jyūryō clan as a whole lacks a unified fighting style, but they seem to have an almost instinctive ability to utilize their tenketsu and, while their chakra control varies from clan member to clan member, they can often boost their physical abilities with greater ease and reliability then other ninja, enhancing their speed and strength as a result.
Rivals/Nemesi/Enemy organizations:
Rank/ed on the Bingo book: Omoi is generally considered a Class A opponent, however given his level of Taijutsu there was at least a two instances of him being rated as an S class opponent in a foreign bingo books. However, he is not rated as such in most, but he clearly pushes the boundaries of A Class to the limit.

Hobbies: Rock Gardening, Calligraphy, Candle-making
Favoured Places: Hokage Monument, Barbecue Resturants, his Rock Garden
Personal dislikes: Genjutsu, People who mess up his rock garden, Swimming
Teammates: Omoi has never trained a genin team, and his old team has been split up and has not worked together for years.
Preferred comrades: Nishiyori Fukakouryoku, Takuma Itsuki
Closest Friends: Nishiyori Fukakouryoku ('Rival', Friend), Takuma Itsuki (Sparring Partner)

Jutsu Ratings:
Ninjutsu: A-
Genjutsu: D-
Taijutsu: S+
Fuinjutsu: C+
Juinjutsu: D-
Sougujutsu: B+

Abilities:
Intelligence: 6
Flexibility: 8
Chakra Capacity: 9
Chakra Control: 4
Physical Power: 9
Stamina: 10
Just a quickly done up thing, need to talk to people about character links and/or rivalries. Editing it constantly as little things stand out.
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby MEKristian » December 3rd, 2009, 9:58 pm

When did Jamie Hynamin(sp?) become a ninja!? *brick'd*
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby Nasdaq » December 3rd, 2009, 10:00 pm

Hehehe... "Genjutsu... Busted"
"Sasuke was not really happy with his team. The shy Hyuuga, and the laziest person he'd ever known where not people he'd have picked. And he never expected how a blue-eyed, blond-haired, and newly minted jounin would transform them all into a true team." - Naruto-sensei, currently in Arc 2: The Chuunin Exams
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby MEKristian » December 4th, 2009, 12:54 am

And now he's Domon Kasshu. Fun.
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby Nasdaq » December 4th, 2009, 1:05 am

Yeah, placeholder till I find a better catchphrase or drop one all together.
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby spudman » December 7th, 2009, 7:29 pm

Nasdaq, still need associations/rivalries for Omoi? He could be the "Gai" to Nishiyori's "Kakashi" (You can thank Flux for the latter comparison). The quote is a placeholder but Omoi seems like the enthusiastic sort (though the hobbies clash with such a personality, but that'd just make things funnier).
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby Nasdaq » December 8th, 2009, 11:28 am

Yes, actually, he is fairly enthusiastic, actually. Less flamboyant then Guy, but the hobbies are intended to sort of throw it off. They're exactly what someone would not expect. But, then again, Naruto gardens.
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby Disconnected » December 18th, 2009, 6:29 am

K I have no idea where the thread to use him in is but i shall make a character as well.

Name:Hyuuga Hayate

Nickname:The Black Lightning.

Village:Konoha

Rank:Special Jounin, ANBU Hunter-Nin

Codename:Wolf

ANBU Mask:Wolf with no eye holes.

Specializations:All-out warfare and Missing-Nin elimination.

Signature Techniques:Wrath of the Thunder God(If someone would Japannanize this for me it would be appreciated): Calls down a bolt of lightning from the sky(only usable outdoors) to strike the user while simultaneously insulating the them, the bolt then spreads out electrocuting anything in the immediate area.
Maelstrom: Combination Weapon/Kaiten technique where he uses his ungodly speed to litter the floor with kunai and shuriken with chakra strings attached before doing a kaiten, causing all of the weapons to become a whirling mass of destruction.
Constant Byakugan activation.
Arashi: A teleportation Technique similar to the Hiraishin, but with the drawback of only being able to teleport to an area within your line of sight. (Where he got his Nickname, because of the signiture black lightning bolt that strikes where ever he teleports from/to.)

Catchphrase:. . ., . . .? :?: , . . .! :!:

Appearance:Typical Hyuuga long black hair in a loose ponytail, typical Hyuuga Byakugan with unknown tint if any, Typical ANBU uniform.

External Contacts:most border guards for the various lands as well as their hunter-nin.

Clan/Family:Hyuuga

Summons:None

Age:28 (Born 0/Grad academy 9/Chunin 10/SpecJoun 12/ANBU 16)

Elemental affinities:Lightning.

Clan abilities/Kekkai Genkai:Jyuken, Kaiten/Byakugan

Rivals/Nemesi/Enemy organizations:Don't know yet, well beside Missing-Nin in general.

Rank/ed on the Bingo book:High A-Low S, Approach only with superior firepower and superior numbers, stealth impossible.

Hobbies:Reading and playing shogi

Favored Places:Any quiet, shady spot he can read in.

Personal dislikes:The Uchiha clan in general, people who assume hes a pervert because his Byakugan are active all the time, and poeple who disrupt him peace and quiet.

Personal Likes:Peace and quiet, good books and good food.

Teammates:Don't know yet.

Preferred comrades:Don't know yet.

Closest Friends:Don't know yet.

Ninjutsu (E-S):Mid to high A
Genjutsu (Ibic):Negligible
Taijutsu (Ibic):High A
Fuinjutsu (Ibic):Mid B
Juinjutsu (Ibic):Negligible
Sougujutsu (Ibic):High B(I am assuming this is weapons skill?)
Intelligence (1-10) (1 is Konohamaru, 10 is Shikamaru):6
Flexibility (Ibic) (1 is Chouji, 10 is Hinata):10
Chakra Capacity (Ibic) (1 is Lee, 10 is Kisame):7
Chakra Control (Ibic) (1 is Naruto, 10 is Sakura):10
Physical Power (Ibic) (1 is Pre-timeskip Sakura, 10 is Tsunade):3
Stamina (Ibic) (1 is... I dunno, Udon, 10 is Naruto):7

The son of Hyuuga Neji and Tenten,(will change later if it is decide that Neji cant be his father or didn't marry Tenten.) Hayate was considered a prodigy from an early age displaying skill in both Hyuuga clan techniques and Sougujutsu since the age of three and entered into the academy at the age of five, during his academy days he was considered Aloof or just plain anti-social rarely speaking mostly only when someone spoke to him first, He only really started to open up a little when he met his genin team, mostly through the efforts of teammate Kazama Misato a rather exuberant and out going girl from a former Whirlpool clan whose last surviving members emigrated to Konoha around the same time as Uzumaki Kushina.More will come later as my brain decides to become creative again.
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby Random_fan » December 18th, 2009, 6:55 am

Yay, another ninja. Anyway when ever I get the motivation I'll put up the bio for another ninja I've been working on.
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby Phht » December 18th, 2009, 7:19 am

Please note that ANBU anything is not a rank, it is a job position. Please, please, please supply a Genin/Chunin/Special Jounin/Jounin rank in addition to the ANBU stuff. Given the provided stats, he would appear to still be Special Jounin.

I think the general feel is that melee weapons/combat is Taijutsu, thrown/ranged weapons are Sougujutsu. So if the guy's weapon skill is just throwing stuff like kunai, senbon, shuriken, etc, then Sougujutsu would be the way to go.

Other than that, nothing stands out on first few checks on it (but my brain has also got ~20 hours of Batman: Arkham Asylum on it and I need more sleep).
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby Nasdaq » December 18th, 2009, 4:29 pm

Well, apparently Konoha has no Hunter-Nin, that's a Kirigakure thing.
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby Tempest Kitsune » December 18th, 2009, 5:14 pm

I'm sure they do have Hunter-Nin, but they're probably a sub-section of ANBU. Kiri probably developed a corps of Hunter Nin specifically to track down bearers of bloodlines, and when those got rarer, to track down missing nin.
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby Vael » December 18th, 2009, 6:59 pm

Yup, that's right, in fact my character is gonna be a hunter-nin.
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby serbii » December 19th, 2009, 2:20 am

Move discussion to the character discussion thread please.
This topic was meant to be just the profiles.
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby Disconnected » December 19th, 2009, 2:44 am

Phht wrote:I think the general feel is that melee weapons/combat is Taijutsu, thrown/ranged weapons are Sougujutsu. So if the guy's weapon skill is just throwing stuff like kunai, senbon, shuriken, etc, then Sougujutsu would be the way to go.
According to Narutopedia Kenjutsu is sword skills, Don't know about other melee weapons.
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby ewuvi » December 23rd, 2009, 1:24 am

Name: Kyoko Ishikawa (First, Last)
Nickname: Yuki no Onna (Same as her sister, for some reason)
Village: Konoha
Rank: (elite)Jounin
Codename: Len
Specializations: Taijutsu and ninjutsu, elemental manipluation, dual fighting
Signature Technique: Hyouton techniques, Raiton on her single Tonfa
Catchphrase: ???
Appearance: Clothes: Temari-esque top, skirt over tights, boots, short gloves and elbow guards. Dark skin, black hair that’s kept in two high, short pigtails.
External Contacts: Tons of cousins and half-siblings in Kumo
Clan/Family:Father was a Iwa-nin and their mother is a Kumo-nin. They ended up in Konoha because their mother's pregnancy was an accident, and the father decided to take the child(ren) after she gave birth. They couldn't settle on a village for the child(ren) to be raised, because Kumo and Iwa kind of have negative stereo-types of each other, and neither parent really disproves them. (Their mother is really obnoxious and prone to brawling, and their father looks and acts like a chick most of the time).
They decided on Konoha because a) Both villages have positive relations with Konoha, and b) Mizu and Suna have very bad climates for healthy hair.
Summons: None
Age: 20. (Born 30 AR)
Grad: 10 (40 AR)
Chunin: 11 ("Being a genin's boring, let's make chuunin!") (41 AR)
SpecJoun: 14 (44 AR)
Jounin: 17 (47 AR)
Elemental affinities: Wind with a second lightning affinity
Clan abilities/Kekkai Genkai: None/Can create Hyouton with her sister.
Rivals/Nemesi/Enemy organizations: Iwa bingo book publishing house
Rank/ed on the Bingo book: A to S except in Kumo, where they're D
Hobbies: SHOPPING! Telling people what's wrong with their outfits, traveling halfway across the continent to go shopping, playing games with children.
Favoured Places: Shops, playgrounds, bath houses.
Likes: Long baths, new things, cute things, her family, children, showing off, Ino Yamanaka - old but she’s a style goddess, candy, anything peach flavored, ikebana, her pet duck, Burt.
Dislikes: Arrogant people, being unclean, ugly things, bad pictures, humid days that makes her hair frizzy, pickled things, people that treat family members and children badly, people being overly serious on missions.
Teammates: Each other
Preferred comrades: Each other, people willing to carry their bags, Hyuuga and Uchiha.
Closest Friends: Each other
Ninjutsu (E-S): S - Kage level if working together
Genjutsu (Ibic): B
Taijutsu (Ibic): A to S, especially when working together
Fuinjutsu (Ibic): B
Juinjutsu (Ibic): D
Sougujutsu (Ibic): A
Intelligence (1-10): 7
Flexibility (Ibic): 9
Chakra Capacity (Ibic): 7
Chakra Control (Ibic): 9
Physical Power (Ibic) : 8
Stamina (Ibic): 7

Kyoko is a very talented ninja, so it’s really a shame that her personality leaves so much to be desired. She’s every bit as shallow as her sister, and can be a total pain to work with. She and her sister often insist that the entire team work out matching outfits. While things like this have helped with under-cover missions, most of the time it’s completely useless. She’ll also try and coerce less attractive team members into maintaining henges for entire missions. Recently, she and Kagami have infiltrated the Iwa bingo book-publishing house to replace their photos, which were very unflattering. Kyoko won’t attack any Kumo-nin with deadly force. This is because of her heritage. It should also be noted that when teams with the Ishikawa twins come in conflict with teams of Kumo-nin, some sort of ‘game’ usually settles it. The reason she became a ninja was because both of her parents had been ninja, her sister wanted to be one, she’s just plain good at it and it pays well. They also get to go all over the place and shop. Which is pretty fabulous, she has to admit.


edit: Yeah, but I forgot the gorram bolding. D:
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby serbii » December 23rd, 2009, 1:29 am

You beat me XD.
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Name: Kagami Ishikawa (first last)
Nickname: Yuki no Onna
Village: Konoha
Rank: (elite) Jounin
Codename: Rin
Specializations: Taijutsu and ninjutsu, elemental manipluation, dual fighting
Signature Technique: Hyuton techniques, Water techniques
Catchphrase: ???
Appearance: Temari-esque top, skirt over tights, boots. Dark skin, black hair with a bandanna (triangle). Outfit is blue and black.
External Contacts: Tons of cousins and half-siblings in Kumo
Clan/Family:Has an identical twins sister. Father was a Iwa-nin and their mother is a Kumo-nin. They ended up in Konoha because their mother's pregnancy was an accident, and the father decided to take the child(ren) after she gave birth. They couldn't settle on a village for the child(ren) to be raised, because Kumo and Iwa kind of have negative stereo-types of each other, and neither parent really disproves them. (Their mother is really obnoxious and prone to brawling, and their father looks and acts like a chick most of the time).
They decided on Konoha because a) Both villages have positive relations with Konoha, and b) Mizu and Suna have very bad climates for healthy hair.
Summons: None
Age: (Born 50AR/Grad academy 40AR/Chunin 41AR/SpecJoun 44AR/Jounin 47AR)
Age: 20.
Grad: 10
Chunin: 11 ("Being a genin's boring, let's make chuunin!")
SpecJoun: 14
Jounin: 17
Elemental affinities: Water with a second lightning affinity. Combines with her sister to make ice.
Clan abilities/Kekkai Genkai: Hyuton when combined with her sister's wind element
Rivals/Nemesi/Enemy organizations: Iwa bingo book publishing house
Rank/ed on the Bingo book: A to S except in Kumo, where they're D
Hobbies: SHOPPING! Telling people what's wrong with their outfits, traveling halfway across the continent to go shopping
Favourite Places: Shops, beach resorts
Likes: Long baths, new things, cool things, their family, children, showing off, Ino Yamanaka - old but style goddess, peaches, iced teas,
Dislikes: Arrogant people, being unclean, ugly things, bad pictures, humid days that makes their hair frizzy, people who take their job too seriously, several exboyfriends.
Teammates: Each other
Preferred comrades: Each other, people willing to carry their bags, the Hyuuga and/or Uchiha as they're notoriously attractive
Closest Friends: Each other
Ninjutsu (E-S): S - Kage level if working together
Genjutsu (Ibic): B
Taijutsu (Ibic): A to S, especially when working together
Fuinjutsu (Ibic): B
Juinjutsu (Ibic): D
Sougujutsu (Ibic): A
Intelligence (1-10) : 7
Flexibility (Ibic): 9
Chakra Capacity (Ibic) : 7
Chakra Control (Ibic): 9
Physical Power (Ibic): 8
Stamina (Ibic): 7

About: She's quite spectacularly shallow, her personality sits somewhere between Ruby from the pokemon manga and Quinn from Daria. However she's naturally very talented, it's really quite tragic this kind of girl got so much talent from genetics. She does work hard because being a ninja is cool, keeps you in shape and lets her travel. She'll probably never have any real position of power because her priorities are in the wrong place. Also she has a habit of ignoring politics and treaties.
She tends to judge people by their appearance, not so much "That guy looks week" as "That guy has an ugly hair cut, I don't want to work with him" or "Our outfits will clash".
Will go to incredible lengths for petty things, like running off to Iwa with her sister, breaking into the bingo book printers and changing their picture in the book.
Daddy's girl.

Some more stuff I'll probably think of later.
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby MEKristian » December 23rd, 2009, 1:49 am

"H-How did these two pass the chunin exam, much less make jounin? Was that Jackal having a night of binge-drinking when he passed them...? I think I hate Konoha's chain of command now..."
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby serbii » December 23rd, 2009, 2:00 am

They probably spent ages planning how to make the battle look really, really cool instead of training.
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Re: Konoha Nin and Allied Personnel

Unread postby ewuvi » December 23rd, 2009, 2:04 am

If nothing else, they've got style.

We should probably move this over to an RP thread or character discussion, eh?
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