Awesome! More attention is always good.Just finished reading it. I liked it a lot, actually, and it deserves more reviews in my opinion. I'll be following it. :3
Well since one of my concerns was keeping Sasuke IC that's good news. And yeah, one of my goals setting out was really to help the girls get on the same level as the guys without giving them stupid powerups.I added it to my C2. (which no one follows, but it's the thought that counts, right?)
Liked how Sasuke was thoughtful, and Sakura not useless.
Ah, the first test? I loved that chapter.Just got done reading part I of the Chunin Exam, and this is getting favorited.
Well by now it's official - posting it in this thread was the best thing I ever did for my story. Glad I can change someone's mind about OCs, they're hated so much in fanfiction circles (not without cause of course)Just read the above story, and it is good. I am normally very leery of OC's as the focus, but Quotes endorsement pushed me into reading it andI am glad I did. Definitely on the alert list, and probably favorites in a couple chapters.
Yeah, that's been bugging me recently. I do have an arc planned in between the second and third tests that should help with this issue though.Indeed the OC is quite likeable and the general theme appeals to me. However some more 'in-depth-ness' would be in order. I see that with all Konoha 12 it's hard to focus properly on each of them.
Well I'm really glad everyone likes it. Thanks for reading!Interesting so far, although I tend to agree with Greybane on OC's this story is going well on that front. Actually got me to log into FF.net and made my alert list. Looking forward to the continuation of the story.
I liked this much more than TUNS, which I'm going to have to admit, I didn't get past the first 3 chapters. TFATH seemed fresher - more energetic. I have some quibbles about how it goes, but I do have to admit I like the idea of a girl Naruto, while finding the idea simultaneously very weird. At any rate, it makes the Sasuke relationship work much better.Got one more to share, while I'm also working on TUNS and other things, this is a side project that exploded out of a plot bunny like a xenomorph larva from a colonist.
The Fox and the Hound
As I said in my review on ff.net, I think you've been listening to Spacebattles a bit too much. I can't say I agree at all with your interpretation of Hinata.
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