I like where this is going, Nuroto is not super powerful or all all knowing. Too bad about their Sensei dieing like that, now the conssery (sp) will either run wild or quietly get rid of those who are too ‘troublesome’. I think Danzo and his Root org. had something, others helped without a doubt.
I’m sorry but I have to dissagree Bill Ponder, Naruto is not superpowered you say, he knocked out Sasuke with one punch in the chuunin prelims , I know he’s had a lot more development with Gai and Kurenai but compare that to his canon self who only won againsy Kiba on a fluke at the same time.
Also as for Kurenai’s death, I strongly feel there was no impact at all, the author decided to immidialty switch to a hotel scene with Naruto leaqving her Death up in the air. If someone who’s been integral to the story dies I’d prefer to know about it rather than guess.
But I digress ‘ now the conssery (sp) will either run wild or quietly get rid of those who are too ‘troublesome’’
Also just so you know you shouldnt make up up words like ‘conssery especially when you stick it in a sentence which makes no sense, it makes you sound retarded.
Hey fellow author from Fanfic. Love ur stories mate, just wondering if you’ve ever considered doing a crossover with Naruto and Harry Potter. I’d love to see you write one, anyway heres to your next update…cheers.
wow
i just started watching naruto after a friend forced me to set through the first 12 episodes and found i liked it. be cause of this i searched for fanfiction and stumbled across your piece and have to say that it was impressed. your characters seem to stay in character and plot well thought out. look forward to your next update. keep up the good work
-iwryou
So I came across NoFP a while ago, killed that off, got bored waiting for an update, and decided to read through Team 8 today to pass the time and I like it.
Congratulations.
*ahem* i realized this was posted n the wrong thread, so here you go
Waah you killed kurechan, hate you and love you for it,
cant wait to see 21
made an account just to comment at ff but i forgot email password so here i am, anyway, i love your work and must say i was reffered bty MegaB of K:NP but thats irrelevant, still i admit you have the best story on fanfiction dot net at the current moment, keep up the damn fine work and give your beta a hug, or cookie, i dont know how internet cookies work, that is assuming you have a beta, anyway, i love the plot device of charachterdeath and hate it cuz that meaans no more kurenai, bah , im now going to read anoth.. oh sh… its 130 AM goodnight S”tarkan great srory
I like where this is going, Nuroto is not super powerful or all all knowing. Too bad about their Sensei dieing like that, now the conssery (sp) will either run wild or quietly get rid of those who are too ‘troublesome’. I think Danzo and his Root org. had something, others helped without a doubt.
-Bill Ponder
Good to hear. Any idea of when the next chapter of NoFP is going to see light?
I’m sorry but I have to dissagree Bill Ponder, Naruto is not superpowered you say, he knocked out Sasuke with one punch in the chuunin prelims , I know he’s had a lot more development with Gai and Kurenai but compare that to his canon self who only won againsy Kiba on a fluke at the same time.
Also as for Kurenai’s death, I strongly feel there was no impact at all, the author decided to immidialty switch to a hotel scene with Naruto leaqving her Death up in the air. If someone who’s been integral to the story dies I’d prefer to know about it rather than guess.
But I digress ‘ now the conssery (sp) will either run wild or quietly get rid of those who are too ‘troublesome’’
Also just so you know you shouldnt make up up words like ‘conssery especially when you stick it in a sentence which makes no sense, it makes you sound retarded.
Hey fellow author from Fanfic. Love ur stories mate, just wondering if you’ve ever considered doing a crossover with Naruto and Harry Potter. I’d love to see you write one, anyway heres to your next update…cheers.
wow
i just started watching naruto after a friend forced me to set through the first 12 episodes and found i liked it. be cause of this i searched for fanfiction and stumbled across your piece and have to say that it was impressed. your characters seem to stay in character and plot well thought out. look forward to your next update. keep up the good work
-iwryou
So I came across NoFP a while ago, killed that off, got bored waiting for an update, and decided to read through Team 8 today to pass the time and I like it.
Congratulations.
That was a really surprising chapter. I kind of expected Kurenai to die at some point, but not this early.
*ahem* i realized this was posted n the wrong thread, so here you go
Waah you killed kurechan, hate you and love you for it,
cant wait to see 21
made an account just to comment at ff but i forgot email password so here i am, anyway, i love your work and must say i was reffered bty MegaB of K:NP but thats irrelevant, still i admit you have the best story on fanfiction dot net at the current moment, keep up the damn fine work and give your beta a hug, or cookie, i dont know how internet cookies work, that is assuming you have a beta, anyway, i love the plot device of charachterdeath and hate it cuz that meaans no more kurenai, bah , im now going to read anoth.. oh sh… its 130 AM goodnight S”tarkan great srory
Question. Perhaps I missed it somewhere, but what is the status of NoFP. Chapters to come or will it be a WIP?
Came across it recently, excellent read but still waiting?
Keep waiting? or. . . .
good work i really enjoyreading it again