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what did you do with the red punch to the head? Most likely senario is you gave naji a 3-5 day concussion, but due the the repeating theme in most naruto fics (yours included) the demons chakras tends to have a very…adverse effect on seal stability, so its possible you could have just changed, broken or even removed neji’s caged bird seal. THAT would be a real plot shift.
gaa curse my spelling.
You know, normally I’m too lazy to make new accounts just for the purpose of reviewing, but I have to say that’s an interesting idea. Of course, messing up the seal doesn’t necessarily mean making it go away, it could make it much worse in some way. Somehow, that strikes me as more likely.
I hope the last hit did something like Byakugan said, because I’m pretty sure Cannon demon-Chakra-claws administered point-blank to the head would’ve probably taken Neiji’s head off. On the other hand, it’s a very interesting ability for him to have, seeing as how he normally needs to be using at least one chakra-tail before he gets chakra-claws (he gets human-claws just being pissed-off). But I agree with Byakugan, how cool would it be if that removed Neiji’s seal?
That would be awesome. ^_^ I don’t know though… it just seems a bit overboard to me. I mean… Neji was already down and out. If that blow DIDN’T serve a useful purpose then Kurenai is going to kill him for so casually using the red chakra in front of such a large audience. What was he thinking???
I bet Shino is practically smiling behind that collar of his though. Seeing Neji pwned has to be the next best thing to fighting the battle himself.
I can’t wait for Matthew to write everyone’s reactions though!!!
dang… I didn’t really know I used the word “though” so often.
One more thing – what’s going to happen to Iruka? Given his reaction, I doubt that the council/elders are going to be ok with letting him live. And if the invasion happens like in canon, then they’ll have the perfect opportunity to give him a fatal Jyuuken strike to the back while all the Konoha nin are too busy fighting off Sand and Sound to even notice. TT_TT Please don’t kill him!!!!
I just remembered a scene from the manga, all speculations aside, when naruto beat neji, hiashi came to see neji in the colisium hospital and explained the events surounding hazashi’s dead asked for forgivenness and neji mellowed out…alot.
so…my question is: is this going to happen again? you’ve intencified hiashi’s charactor several degrees and there are alot of other new factors in your naruto so it’s entirely possible that this could totaly be skipped or turned on its head. curiosities, curiosities, curiosities.
I think I need a real hobby.
It’s curious how Jiraiya compensated for not teaching the summoning jutso to Naruto, taking to consideration the Toad Hermit being a seals master as well. Maybe Naruto was more in control of his temper than Matt let on in the end of the chapter.
Kudos to you man!!! Trully appreaciate the updates. I hope you take care not to burn out from all the writing though. All these great fics are lifelines to many of us fiction junkies, but if your health suffers, the long term completion of Team 8 might be compromised! so chill a little